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The Eyes of Willow Point

If you knew all that has happened since you left and went away;
Of tears that have been shed because of you.

If you knew of rumors born by one who's word she would betray;
How intentions, though sincere, were misconstrued,

Would silence be your covering still in face of wanton lies,
And honour not be worth determined risk?

Would your love's compelling force not tear away her loathsome guise
And integrity prevent your acquiesce?


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  • Bee gee silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    very heartfelt

    i really enjoyed this marg. i hope the problem with the friend was worked out. if this is make beleeive it is a very interesting take on life and things done and said. nice job.