Cerebral birth of diabolic thoughts
Yet Trinity overtakes
And inundates the Dominion
With a rainbow of Virtue
The Face of The New Day
The Visage of the Creator
A Light that never darkens
Opulence abounds
Overflow of Luminous Love
Encompassing All
A contest entry
- Artists - Poets & Paint by poetryality.
3250 points, ended December 30, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good play on words
I like the play on words. A writer's choice of words always makes up for brevity, to me at least. When I read this, see the reference to Jesus. Do you agree? -
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I agree
Thanx for commenting. Yes sometimes less is more. that's what we say in theatre. I am glad you got my drift, thanx, conni
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You give an enormous amount of light to the art in this poem. I love the language usage and the flow of this work. The mention of the "Trinity" shows that you took advantage of the links provided and truly studied the work of Alex Grey. This entry is superb. Goes to show us all that there is no need to be verbose when writing what one feels. Excellent! Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the Comp.
Much Love & Light ♥
Renee
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