Do as you say and say what you mean!!
I'm sick and I'm finished with your in-between!!
Why can't you be honest, just tell me the truth,
I'm sensing your manners are very uncouth.
This isn't fair and you're not being straight!!
I'm so much younger but I'm not just your play-mate!!
You can't mess with me, what gives you the right?
My emotions are screaming, I'm ready to fight.
You should have just told me, I can handle your words!!
But you treat as a fragile and wounded blackbird.
Next time just don't bother, stop wasting your breath,
right now it;s so painful I'd rather seek death.
Author notes
Ok, I CANNOT STAND TEENAGED BOYS!!! If any of you fit that category and are reading this, I apologize-- you don't apply because you're probably not the rude one.
WHY ARE BOYS SO CONFUSING AND RUDE AND JUST PLAIN DISHONEST???
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this is one of the BEST teen angst poems i've ever read. the flow was so complete, the words were well chosen.
and yeah...teenage boys are just a bunch of losers for the most part. but ah, well. life goes on.
<3wish addict
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the perfect teenage scream and ordeal since forever... son't worry dear until these boys reach their 30's probably 40's they wont come to their senses...
believe it or not this is just PLAIN LIFE
dont worry but this piece is so like Avril Lavigne (Boyfriend song)
lovely n nicely done... amazing flow too
keep up the good work..
I'm sick and I'm finished with your in-between!!
Why can't you be honest, just tell me the truth,
I'm sensing your manners are very uncouth.
PEACE
********JOWELL***********
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I really like the emotion of this poem and there are some very good things about it. However, I think that the rhyme really detracts from the feeling.
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I have to agree with you, teenage boys are so immature and comfusing and stupid. I like the flow and emotion put into this. You can't mess with me, what gives you the right?
My emotions are screaming, I'm ready to fight.
I'd have to say that's my favorite part.
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well... being rude and dishonest can sometimes be fun
but, as for confusing i've met very few other guys deeper than a puddle
motives can often be as plain as day if you take a second to look
in any case liked the poem enjoyed the message
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I'm really sorry. I know how you feel though. I really do!
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i havent a clue
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I really liked this. It's very true. Guys lie... a lot. Believe me. They will do something just because they know it will make you mad! Don't get me wrong I really do have some great guy friends but most of them aren't. I really liked the flow and rhyme of this poem. It was very interesting. Great Job. ^.^
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