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Fantisies

Teach me
he requests

 she moves toward
Stopping 

solitery moment

 she removes her silken lace panties


walking slowly
black and white skirt

contrasting

 yellow steletoes


 standing in front 

 he sits

taking

 right hand

with left hand of nails polished red
 
hand over hand

her creamy inner thigh 

moving up wards
secretly touching herself

 

 his hand has lain
gentel
shocked

moisture within

he smiles
she releases
arching her back
spreading wider


his finger

 

 slides

 

effortlessly

 

 inside


eyes closing

moments suspended
reopen  

 devilish smile

  desprate he becomes

quiet
reaching out 

 trembeling


shhh

cant speak
no sound 

 

 effoertless cries 

 please

please
removing

 reentering
she places her face to his
wispered words
sweet jeasus thank you for this man

sudden

  release
 soft stream down his forarm

 

These are the fantisies

that bombard my mind

suspended in time

Author notes

I comented on Ice Ice baby among others.(but that was my fav.)

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Comments


  • abuyi
    January 24, 2008

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    very erotic very sensual.. i liked your choice of words its simplicity improves it..
    thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest
    regards
    abdulla


  • Ephiphany
    December 26, 2007
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    Wonderful imagery in this one. Wow, thanks for entering and good luck.

    ephiphany


  • Nicotine Eyes
    December 15, 2007
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    Hardcore Holder

    This was nice, not hardcore though. Good luck and ty for enetring!

    [♥]Nicotine.


    • genevieve3
      December 15, 2007
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      thanks, I didnt think it was kink enough, I wanted it to be read and I couldnt find a contest that seemed sutiable, thanks for not dq it and for the read! have fun with your contest!