Winter eyes
delight
with wonder of
pure icicle glow;
a magic wand,
vivid with
bright merry frolic
of morning prism glisten
beneath
snow drift.
Copyright © 2007
Pamela A. Lamppa
(All Rights Reserved)
Author notes
Words used:
delight, wonder, magical, icicle, pure, merry, frolicking, bright, snow, drift,
Image Credit: Unknown
A contest entry
- ~ December Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very frozen winter write Pamela. I like the images. Thanks for sharing and keep the pen flowing.
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ckwriter69
Thank you so much for such kind words. I do appreciate them so much.
Happy New Year my friend. ~Pamela 
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you've captured the essence of this piece
so vivid in imagery and a delight in reading.
Glad I got a chance to return the favor
Ephiphany
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Ephiphany
Thank you so much for your kind words. I love word banks and just can't resist. That combined with snow and I'm a gonner. I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you so much for stopping to read. Thank you. ~Pamela
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wow- such a wonderful flow to this that it does not read as though composed from a word bank at all... winter, while very sad in some aspects, is very magical in others... it is refreshing & a pleasure to read about some of those more fantastical aspects!
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ellipsist
Thank you. Thank you so much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece. ~Pamela
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ooh very visual indeed and a delight to read you have captured the beauty of winter through your words,
very much a delight to read,
Warm holiday thoughts your way, looking out my window today at the purity of it all.
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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Frozentearz
Thank you so much for the honor of silver in this contest. I am just thrilled. Truly a wonderful word bank.
Happy New Year!
~Pamela
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Frozentearz
Thank you my friend. I hear you on the window and the whoosh of winter wind and snow has again lent itself to the building of snow people in my front yard. Up to the knees now...
Merry Merry
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A spendid visual for the minds eye! Thanks for entering and best wishes! Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Blessings,
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Frogz~
Thank you so much for the honor of silver in your contest. It was a wonderful set of words to work with and give me snow to boot? YAY. I am just thrilled. Happy New Year Thank you again. ~Pamela
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Frogz~
Thank you so much. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well. Thank you for such kind words, I am pleased you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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Creates a wonderful image.
So well crafted.
Wishing you the best,
Mark
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Mark
Thank you so much. I am pleased for your comment here and glad you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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it's not fair!...
...how exceptionally you pen everything! l.o.l.! you are my idol!
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Swangrnv
You are kind with your words. Thank you so much for your continuous encouragement and positive thoughts. I appreciate them so much. ~Pamela
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As always, a pleasure to read your poetic words. You make your words carol a beautiful song. I wish you well in the contest.
Sam
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Sam
Thank you so much. Always a pleasure to see your comments on one of my pieces. Thank you. ~Pamela
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