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~* Light Switches ~*

Missing image

 

 

 

 

From a far away galaxy beyond fantasy,
a diamond in the rough revealed
turquoise beads

threaded throughout emerald strands
on pillars of Light switches
infused within hollowed oak.

Stars stretched, left mist trails
in air, branches breathed

to cleanse pollution by pond
where waters posed nude
for pictures before transients.

Starvation stagnate in pantry~

as algae frequented
with endless variety of enrichments;
aged to near perfection.

The forest floor harvested.






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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Oh this is great Gold in my book beats judge with wet noodle . Congrats on the hm


  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    This is truely beautiful...
    Loved the take on the pic... very vivid...
    Best of luck and thank you so much for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Amera gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Beautiful! This takes the reader in a journey through a fantasy that is simply lovely.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 15, 2007
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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!

    Beautiful, touching words for a very beautiful picture.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    Wow! This is just wonderful. Such gorgeous imagery in this certainly takes the reader on a journey through this picture. A stunning piece.
    All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • Swan song gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    This is another beauty D will love this one. Awesome dear well done.


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 14, 2007

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    Simply breath taking. Outstanding Imagery, this is an incredable poem.. Good luck in the contest....


  • StarEyes
    December 14, 2007

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    WOW!!! What a read this one is! A most magical read and the picture too, is just fantastic! I am always amazed by your words!


    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nettie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 14, 2007

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    Beautifully written, sweetie and such awesome imagery!
    Another awesome creation from your pen!
    All the best to you in the contest!


  • penman gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    Excellent

    Terrific creation sweetness. So well penned. Best of luck in the contest.

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