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Give Up On You

you're making a huge mistake
it's going to kill you
but you don't seem to care
you claim you want my support
not for me to sit there and yell at you
but this is going to end your life
eventually you know it will
but yet you continue to make that mistake
so i guess there's nothing more i can do
i officially give up on helping you

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  • songstress80
    December 14, 2007

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    YES!!!

    very excellent write...again you write another powerful short poem that breaks everything down and brings it all together...i know many friends and family that are smokers...thank you for this poem it means a lot to me ;0)