Trapped
Transparent walls surround.
No one can see
What holds me back.
Afraid to struggle.
Afraid to fail.
I am captive in my own mind.
Suddenly walls just tumble. Freedom floods me, suffocating.
Exposed and nervous after years of hiding, Completely normal, but not quite the same.
Some ignore me, others laugh. Some are angry. Damned for living.
What have I done to cause such anger? What have I done to deserve such pain?
Standing firmly moving forward. I want more then my prison.
Soft but swiftly moving forward.
For the first time in my life.
Clear and open, no more secrets
Honestly living.
A contest entry
- tales of taboo by Elora Danon.
910 points, ended December 31, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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It is never easy to allow the world to see us for what we really are. We tend to wear masks to keep ourselves safe from the scrutiny of others.
How wonderful when we can finally "live honestly" and be ourselves. Even through the adversity that may follow.
Thank you for a lovely entry. All the best to you
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I like this for the originality of content. I think it needs to be pared down a bit, but it definitely has potential.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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