Freedom of a darkness told.
A silent heart given light.
The lifted burden heard to bring hope.
The light of beautiful time can finally be given to the innocent eyes of a child.
Amazing light that tears are brought not from sorrow but from a feeling of purity.
Purity so vivid that rainbows dance in the magic of waterfalls.
Listen to the music of life; can you have finally hear it?
Author notes
Hope this poem helps. I finally told a deep secret and this poem was written from the final peace that can to me.
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very beautiful I would say. I like these lines, each one of them seem to be uplifting in their own way. Sorta.
Nice job.
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WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
This was kind of neat. A lot of little inspirational lines made into a poem. Welcome to the site and feel free to ask any questions.
Despair
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I'm glad that telling this deep secret has brought you peace...it really doesn't do much for me. A nicely written piece, but not what I'm looking for. Thanks for taking the time to enter.
Wyattxxx
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