Faith - fulfilling,
Passion - enlightening.
Brides of Christ, corrupted
By vanity, pride, lust, desire.
Seductive whispers, peroxide, lipstick stains,
Vows of chastity broken.
Author notes
This is based on the picture here: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2381988
I'm not bashing. I'm not anti-any religion. My apologies if you are offended.
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haha thats deadly, great for the pic you had to write about; very original! congrats! xxx
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Thanks! BTW, TGC was brilliant... I definitely have to finish reading the books...
Hmmmm... Not too sure about better than HP though... For now, I'll just say it's a tie!
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All the things I've longed for
in this simply said stanza three.
I wish to thee offend
if only for a threesome now.
Cereberus delights in triplet.
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ohhh...THIS is...
very well done...
exactly what the contest prompt would suggest!!!
gotta love lipstick stains...LOL!!!
and peroxide ain't bad either!
Blessings! Tammy
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Thank you very much!
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