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Passion

Electricity,
Lust pulsates through our beings,
Prophesying bliss.

You and I, entwined,
The ecstacy - powerful,
Our love - infinite.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 12, 2009
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    Yes, yes...blissful indeed.


  • DrunkenRam
    March 19, 2008

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    This is truly a solid write, it carries well, it flows well, and it has substance, I like it, and I wish you well in the contest, go get em Girl.


  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007
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    Electricty,
    Lust pulsates through our beings,
    Prophecising bliss.

    You and I, entwined,
    The ecstacy - powerful,
    Our love - infinite.

    Thank you for entering mu ku contest. This is a very interesting write but I did notice typos.

    Electricty,

    Should be:

    Electricity,

    Prophecising bliss.

    Should be:

    Prophesying bliss.


  • sheltered gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    Sounds like perpetual passion soulfully pesonified.