today carro asked
"are you hypo"
i replied i dunno
she said to eat some love hearts
she only asked cos i said
"it sucks. EVERYTHING SUCKS"
i was walking through the dark,
with tears in my eyes.
knowing i mustn't cry
but how can i stop?
i knew it was foolish
but i felt i must
even if it isnt ME
i must be happy no matter what
for i AM the happy one.
surely even fake hapiness is good?
if you really must know,
i took her advice.
so i ate a whole packet.
i still dont feel better.
cos ma bastard brother
pissed me off AGAIN
yet someday it'll be different.
when i act the act,
ill show him who's who.
that he's a twat.
honestly, if youre depressed
or even just a bit down.
never use artificial happiness.
it isnt the same.
it dosent help.
it only hinders.
love hearts cant replace hapiness.
if only something could.
we would all be saved.
i think i might be hypo....?
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Trapped
Trapped is what this poem makes me feel.....Nowing that what you whant is out there, but not being able to connect. And then trying to create an artificial reality around yourself, but it's an act. Just I Great Piece of work....I generally picture myself in a dark cave all alone with no way out when I read this kind of poem.....I only hope that the inspiration is recognized and self saved in the discovery that the only one to change the state of being inside can only be changed by self, and when it's found no retribution is necessary because the source of happiness has nothing to do with the happiness.
None the less.....I enjoyed the poem and felt the pain it portrayed, which is the pupose for writing a piece of work.......GREAT JOB!
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Thanks
thanks for replying, it means a lot to me. nobody really knows how i actually feel. but im addicted to love haerts and they send me hyper, but thanks so much for comenting
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