Ahh winter has come
what a magical delight.
Snow has fallen,
just think of the pure heavenly fun.
I love to just sit beside a nice warm fire
watching the kids frolicking all about.
Jack frost nips at your nose.
Playing in a snowdrift or
sword fighting with an icicle in hand.
The sun is so warm and bright
small diamond like sparkles all around.
I sometimes look back and wonder,
what happened to the winter fun?
But for now, I am just going to sit here
and wish you a Merry Christmas Season.
Author notes
Words.
snow, drift, icicle, bright, Merry, frolicking,
wonder, delight, pure, magical.
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A contest entry
- ~ December Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Edward:
Ah, snow, fresh virginal and beautiful snow.....
children building snow-people, and snow angels all over the place.....
I have not seen snow for so many years now, and yet this piece takes me there,
where I wish I could be.....
Oh, Edward, you have taken me on a journey through a true Winter's season, where
we need to bundle up in order to enjoy it, not tee-shirts and shorts.....
(like we do in Florida).....
Thank you, for this.....
AngelicMistress


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And a very Merry Christmas to you Ed,
Wishing you a warm filled Holiday season,
Winter fun is never lost sometimes we just have to re liveit through children,
wishing you this,
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
... and a Merry Christmas to you too Ed I would love to sit by a warm fire and have these thoughts too but I have to make do with a warm radiator, which isn't quite the same but at least I have the luxury of the warmth from it and your heart to get through these cold days. The winter fun hasn't gone, it's still inside you if you care to look and find it again


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AHH now this was a beautiful poem. The imagery of the new fallen snow is as lovely as the picture you chose. I love this poem. Different then I am use too from you. I do hope you write more of these.
You take care my friend. Always, Sandy


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Very nice poem, somehow dreamy with a note of longing and it is written much different than most of your poetry. Like you need a quite place to take a rest but no, not of poetry. Your writing becomes very mature.
~Sonja~

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You certainly did pen a beauty with the word bank, good luck although you may not need it! Happy Holidays~!I know yours differ from ours,...mm

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Very nicely done, sweetie!
I LOVE the Christmas season and you wrote of it beautifully!
All the best to you! -
Ahh, at times I really miss this kind of holiday season.
But for now, I guess I'll kick back by the pool, watch the kids swimming and having sword fights with those foam pool noodles and be dazzled by the diamond glintz reflecting in the sand.
(Sometimes I don't miss that kind of holiday season too!)
Nice write hun
Good luck in the contest
Storm -
For someone who never sees snow and has always longed for a White Christmas your words bring a touch of magic. I can feel the warm glow of the fire and see the winter sun reflecting off the crystals of newly fallen snow. Best wishes to you in the contest and may your Christmas bring you all that you wish for.
Margaret


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Your words are beauty that
softly glides across the screen
painting a vision of winters fun
and a warm fire when the day is done
Riftkin











