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Wonder of Winter

The wonder of winter,
Merry December.
Children frolicking in the meadow.
Pure delight,
On Christmas night.
Bright lights sparkle off the icicles,
As soft snow drifts off my roof.

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  • earthstar
    January 4, 2008

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    This is so picture perfect one can feel the scene unfold before there eyes. I Love the Christmas lights they make the holiday so cheery and bright. I love your write. Simple and very sweet. Thank you for your wonderful comments. It made my day reading it. I shall be smiling all day lone. Take care and a Happy New Year.