Serenity sates savage beast
with touch as tender as the sky,
enfolding thunderous subfusc roars
in saffron soft lullaby,
and canker attack is broken
upon the shores of tranquillity,
accords are woven with respect that
storm and calm can live in equanimity.
Author notes
Colin Marschall aka Fug-azi
Edited - 17/12/07
A contest entry
- Rule by the People round two by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended March 24, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty Before Nicety
Comments
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Equanimity...I wonder. This is very very good. Well done. ~Pamela
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yay yay yay
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excellent
your use of spectacular use of imagery never ceases to amaze me..love the ...in saffron soft lullaby..all about balance huh?..that storm and calm can be at peace..love it..excellent..good luck in the contest..
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