K.M decorated and naturous
ate, by, living aside wood bugs of a Doherty
daybreak and dead roots came
the will to live like a drug of tree
lost the will to fight
oxygen would breathe out exhaustion and enthrallment
day break and the celebrity with a bra and a park
as if a jack in the box, Pete in the box
to repeat herself into a black out
dark would come and jump out with love
mere model; she a fragment of winter that will fray away
fragilous moss to grow like bones on her body
away she stood, the heart slashed
a carver of P.D merely out of sight and nowhere to save
nowhere to be seen
more oxygen in the mind of a leaf came to four winds
it was her eyes as leaves that fell to the floor
winter had came and Moss grew or shrunk
she thought of how she first brushed past the man
and how she were hunted down
merely out of sight - the fog would put off warm love
Moss would bever learn
Author notes
This is about Kate Moss and Pete Doherty symbolizing the weather change - of how it gets colder and how darker nights come into comparison
A contest entry
- What Dreams May Come .... With Nurse Chilly by Cat.
2000 points, ended December 30, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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a totally different aspect to the contest idea... very creative
many many thanks for entering our contest
good luck too
G.x -
i think of all the unexpected ideas in any of the contests i've ever held this one probably takes the left fieldiest idea ever-
that said- i like that you got creative and used a completely unexpected idea
i wish though that you had tightened this down a bit- paint it more than tell it-
i do appreciate your entry here and am glad you joined the fun
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