Insane thoughts paint a morbid picture,
as crimson tears pour down the eyes of statues.
A dark cloud covers the entire planet,
devouring the sun and every source of light.
Trees begin to shrivel up and collapse,
livestocks fall breathless in the fields.
Birds and butterflies crash and burn in mid-air,
oxygen seems to evaporate instantly.
The stars that used to burn so brightly,
are now dull and void in the sky.
The clouds are much thicker and darker,
they blanket the universe like volcanic ash.
As the world comes crashing down before him,
he sits with a smile in his oxygen chamber.
One that he has built and hidden from the world,
for his own selfish future and survival.
His evil plans have left the world extinct,
and life as we once knew it has stopped completely.
He opens up his eyes and looks around the room,
his eyes glow red from his sinister plans.
He takes out his pen as he anxiously rocks in his chair.
He begins to write furiously upon his notebook.
Taking notes on this sickening and horrifying dream,
one that he looks forward to making come true.
He grins evilly as he cuts his hand with a knife.
His blood drips uncontrollably to the floor.
He feels the pain and enjoys every moment of it.
Thunder and lightning blast down upon his wretched heart.
Blood drips from his hand as he walks out of his house.
He looks up to the sky and lets out a scream,
leaving his evil mark all across the city.
Walls are soaked with as a warning of things to come.
Author notes
Option #10
Father
A contest entry
- Anything goes really by Blood13Rayne.
390 points, ended December 26, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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I love end of the world writes, this was a great read. Congrats on the trophy's and good luck in this one
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well done this is amazingly wirtten wow very good
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Ooh, I love it! This is wonderful, and I can see that the gold trophies are a testament to that! I loved it! Well done, and good luck!
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very well written;
sadly truth -
For me this felt like a beginning of a story; a prologue even. Nice use of imagery throughout. Dark, and well painted lines. Thank you for your entry!!
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OH laced with chilling darkness, very powerful. Well penned, best of luck to you
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This was very powerful... full of wonderful imagery and lots of passion. I am not altogether sure how this relates to the message I am looking for though, so I advise you to let me know...
Well either way, this was a fantastic write.
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Im kidna confused, does it ahve to do with the effect mankind has on global warming?
because thats the vibe i got off it.
very well written, good luck in my contest -
Holy smokes...
this was quite the darky
Wonderfully done wow...
Was holding my breath through the entire piece...
Best of luck in the contest.
Love,
Delila
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I love this poem!!! Its AMAZING!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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