Oh God
you are not witnessed yet you subsist
and we all are viewed yet not abide
there is a fact between us
whether you do not continue
whether you do endure
how to comprehend this truth?
when a new born baby screams
it display that we are ontological like an authenticity
when people cries in the graveyard
it perceives that you are the subsistence
though what else is a truth
if I guess that is a lie when I discern
Oh God..
A contest entry
- Realism by Tangled Angle.
450 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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In a world of gray...
In a world of gray, it's difficult to see things in terms of black and white when it comes to truth; it's a shame that we must leave this earth to fully grasp the realities of God's truth - so we must have faith! Another wonderful and thought provoking piece! --Joe
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Your mind is great and you have deep thoughts.
Thought you may think my opinion is funny, I think a newborn baby screams in rebellion at being brought into this world. I think graveyards should have been a thing of the past long ago.
Smile,
Judy
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