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All Because Jesus Loves You

Frolicking among the snowflakes,
is the magical touch of Christmas.
Icicles hang from roof tops,
a sign of winter's kiss.

Laughter drift's with zephyr's whisper,
spreading the delight of children.
Bright smiles upon each face,
as they wonder when Santa's coming.

Merry times fill the homes with love,
joy is pure and true.
The season is such a beautiful one,
all because Jesus loves you!
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Frolicking, snow, magical, icicle, drift, delight, bright, wonder, merry, pure

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 15, 2008

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    This is an outstanding write. You sure had to use a lot of words. I think you did an excellent job with it.
    Kelli


  • grannyeri gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Really an eye catching presentation you have created on this page. Works so well for this time of year. Words used very well in these lines - easy to read and understand.

  • darrylblacksr
    December 18, 2007

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    A delightful poem for this time of the year. But through god all is possible. I thank you for sharing this with me and god bless you. good luck in the competiton...


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    I loved the imagery in your first stanza especially, though certain of winter's kisses I can well do without. I like how you've incorporated both the true and secular aspects of Christmas within your poem, but I suppose that even Santa has his roots in the spiritual.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    A beautiful write and presentation. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice descriptives. Skillful use of the word bank. Nice alliteration and assonance. Lovely closing verse. Well penned and much enjoyed.


  • Vickie J
    December 17, 2007

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    Here you go again, making magic out of ordinary words-giving them life and pizazz!!!! All I want for Christmas is to have an ounce of the talent you have when it comes to writing (Lord, she wouldn't even miss it-so I think it's okay to borrow some from her, right?)
    Best wishes in the contest!


  • Frozentearz
    December 16, 2007

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    This was truly a delight,
    Love the snow that gently falls within the page as you read, gives it a warm touch, and your words are perfect. As always thanks for sharing,
    Warm thoughts to you and yours this holiday season,
    Love and LIght
    Frozentearz

  • jodygirl
    December 15, 2007

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    Excellent

    With this beautifully written poem, you have told the full story of Christmas. Both fantasy and spiritual emotions claimed me as I read it. This is a great entry and I wish you luck in the contest.
    P.S. The snowflakes are a terrific addition to the image of winter.
    In God's Love,
    Joan


  • melphleg gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    nice

    Love the graphic and the point at the end. The piece has that nice Christmas feeling. Don't care for Santa but that's just me personally. It's a delightful piece.


    • Samplette gold member
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you....through the season the children wait for santa, but Jesus is who comes.


  • Frogzter gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    Beautiful! The graphics really add to the beauty of your words! A great message here using all the words! I love the pic at the bottom! It really brings your words to life with the true reason for the season!

    Blessings and best wishes!

    Frogz~


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 14, 2007
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    This is a wonderful poem.

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