Its too late for this now.
I've done this so many times.
I cant take the pressure.
Your glamor has abandoned you in your place.
I want you to just disappear.
every time I look at you I see the worst,
I just want to break you.
but ever time I do I lose you.
Why cant I do this with out you now.
I want to go so far
I want to disappear.
I hate you, your nothing,
Just a reflection, of what I want to be.
I cant stand you now.
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I want to change alot of this its rough and just not enough
Well I'm not sure what happend here I am not to sure if I like it cmon hit me up with your thoughts good and bad.
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I agree there could be more but i'm not too sure what more you could say right now... Um... It's still a really good right... Bravo
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"your glamor has abandoned you in your place."
I like this line alot....it fits so much of society now and makes you think of how we really live
"I hate you, your nothing,
Just a reflection, of what I want to be."
This is a lovely description of how we think of people everywhere we see.....we wish we were them -
wow, good write. I agree with you that it could be more. Dont ask me what cuz i dont really know. I can realate to this poem. Love it!
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I love the wording you used and I can relate to the poem. You put alot of emotion into it! you did an amazing job!
Evee
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WELL I LOVE YOUR POEM ITS GREAT IT JUST PUTS WORDS TO WHAT I WAS FEELING ONCE
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Oo! I like it!
I like the wording!
And the emotion you put inot it.
Its overall a good poem!
Thanks for sharing!
♥Natalie
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