Its the magical time of year
When all you love come near
You sit by the fire
With wonder and desire
And all troubles disappear.
"Merry Christmas!" you call to the night
As the snow dances with its delight
And the night drifts away
And you start to say
"I think the future looks bright..."
The next day is covered in snow
Down the stairs purehearted they go
On the roof icicles hang
Out the door they do bang
To go frolicking into the snow.
Author notes
Actually...I used allt the words. hope it's ok...
A contest entry
- ~ December Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww you should have won.
today is january 2. i will see you tomorrow. or rather later today. its after midnight.
i am on my new laptop.
i love you rhi. my bestest friend. <3
Abby -
You left us with the impression of the frolicking and fun the children have within the snow, Loved this part.
"Out the door they do bang
To go frolicking into the snow." gives great visual.
Warm thoughts,
Frozentearz -
Indeed a magical time of year! Some wonderful imagery you have penned with catchy rhyme. Please add the words you used in your authors notes as the host asked. Thanks for entering and best wishes!
Frogz~
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