Snow flakes swirling to the ground,
drifting to create patterns all around.
Icicles hanging from the lamp posts,
under the glow, shining more than most.
Inside windows fires burn bright,
people merry on this joyous night.
Dancing and frolicking all together,
guarded from the freezing weather.
Gazing at the decorations in wonder,
and a delightful tree with presents under.
Commemorating the birth of one so pure,
this magical time is becoming obscure.
Author notes
Prompt; winter word bank. Words used..
snow, drift(ing), icicle(s), bright, Merry, frolicking,
wonder, delight(ful), pure, magical.
A contest entry
- ~ December Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended December 30, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You have such a way with imagery, it's absoulutely amazing. This was beautiful 'n truly described the essence of my favorite holiday...
Merry Christmas!
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you have brought some great imagery within this write,
Thanks for joiing in our winter fun,
Warm thoughts to you and yours this holiday season.
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
WOW this flowed so well and was so beautiful in imagery, I didn't realize you had a word bank here at first...amazing and excellent as usual sissy, best to you in the contest
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Christmas
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Something for every man to read and not feel uncomfortable!
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An enchanting scene you have created using all the words! A wonderful read1 Thanks for joining the fun!
Blessings and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
Picture perfect!
You made it so easy
to visualize this
enchanted scene.
Best wishes in the contest!
~Pastel
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I do love that last line; a stirring commentary on our society today.
Well wishes in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.
rous -
This is gorgeous. The imagery took me on a journey. Well penned indeed."Cold just thinking about it."
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