procrastination
I plan to write about it
in a little while
Author notes
Here is my last one. These were fun.
Written October 31st, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- A 5000 point contest by Darkshade.
250 points, ended December 5, 2003, 65 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This was cute. i liked the twist and it reminded me about the homework that is due
I like hikus because they r simple and elogent and get the point across
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Brilliant! This made me smile, and says so much in few words. Great job with the Haiku form - normally they're not humorous like this. This one rates a "10" for originality and humor.
Best wishes,
Moses -
Nicely done.........good thought.....
If all of us decided to get back to it in a while......well......I don't think many of us would be reading too much.......lol........
or we could always check back later.......seriously though.....very
cute write......thanks.....lisa -
totally delightful. Very well done indeed. I really love it. PERFECT>
Sam
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just perfect! i guess i'll finish this comment ..... in...... a ........litt....l...e .......
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Checked both dictionary.com and poetry.com and both have it as one syllable. It probably a regional thing like fire. (although with fire I’ve found it listed both ways.) Thanks for the comment.
Patti
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cute haiku. i like it. it doesn't fit the format properly though. the last line is 6 syllables-it should be 5. ("while" is 2 syllables).
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