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Wonderland In Winter

Snow is drifting
Icicles dripping
The sun is shining bright

Children playing
Frolicking, laughing
In wonder and pure delight

Hearts are merry
And soon we'll see
A magical night of nights

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I used all of the words. snow, drift, icicle, bright, merry, frolicking, wonder, delight, pure, magical.

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  • Frozentearz
    December 16, 2007

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    I also felt as I read this that there was a soft jingle held withi it,
    Thanks for joining in,
    Warm thoughts this holilday season,
    Frozentearz


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 14, 2007

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    Delightful. So filled with children and innocence and the wonder of the season. Beautiful entry. Best of luck. ~Pamela


    • Katie Lazette
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you Pamela for stopping by to read my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.


  • Samplette gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    I love how this sings in such a rhthmic rhyme. You have done such a great job with the word bank. I wish you well in the contest.
    Sam


  • daviscth silver member
    December 14, 2007
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    I really enjoyed this one. The imagery is wonderful. Good luck with this one, Cathy

    • Katie Lazette
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate the comments.


  • Frogzter gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    You used all the words and created a delightful piece in such few words! Thanks for sharing this and joining in the fun! Best of wishes!

    Frogz~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    Wonderful write, best of luck!

    • Katie Lazette
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you for stopping by to read my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.


  • Dorick
    December 14, 2007
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    Good Job! I love to read rhyme.


    • Katie Lazette
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you , I love to write rhyme. It's hard for me to write free verse. Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

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