Slay bells ring
Children screaming
On razor blades
Blood is glistening
A macabre sight
It's beautiful, quite
Stalking in my
Victims Wonderland
Oh the rain
The warm red shower
Who could have known
I'd have such power
I'm Master Of Life
With my stilletto knife
The hunter in my
Victims Wonderland
On the gallows we'll play a game of Hangman
Noose around the neck, you are condemned
Any last requests
Before we kill you
The trap door opens up
As you descend
As moonlight comes
And you are sleeping
Into your dreams
I'll be creeping
I'll wake you with screams
Fuck you in your dreams
I'm Master in my
Victims Wonderland
In your nightmares I will be behind you
Gaining ground and breathing down your neck
Until you wake up sweating and exhausted
You piss the bed cos' you're a nervous wreck
In the graves
Corpses turning
Rotting flesh
Your stomach churning
A warm welcome To Hell
Please excuse the smell
Of the remnants from my
Victims Wonderland
I'm stalking in my Victims Wonderland
Hunting in my Victims Wonderland
Author notes
Walking In A Winter Wonderland..with a twist
Please tell me what you think
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ya heed case ye,, your worse than me...
This is hilariously dark, but a good take on it...
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Thanks Mike
Headcases are always good to be around... in a fight
Glad you liked this, and didn't ban it, lol
'D' Scott
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cool!
i liked this a lot. It was very dark, hence the reason why I loved it. very twisted and clever!
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Thank you very much
'D' (Scott)
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I thought this was interesting
dark D really but I liked it just remind me never to make you mad at me lol that thought is scary
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Most people say the same thing Searra They don't want me pissed at them...
Glad you like this, and thanks for the comment
'D'
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LOL oh what a dark and twisted take on this. cleverly done
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Thanks Ann. I like to twist the 'innocent' to the not so innocent, lol
I hosted a contest where I wanted the poets to do this, so it was only fair I do one myself
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HAHA!
this is hilarious, it had me laughing. so amazing!
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Thanks Kitty
I'm glad it had you laughing and gave you pleasure
Thanks hon
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Now I am in awe. I thought your other poems were perfect at twisting the Christmas season but this one takes the cake. Every stanza is perfectly in tune. I want to memorize this and sing it on Christmas. That'll turn some heads, don't you think?
Awesome awesome job!
<3
~Kittii
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Go for it, I want this to be the 'Anthem' of future Christmases, lmao.
I'm glad you enjoyed this write Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on it
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thy words stretch into echoes heard past those screams found in crimson tears!
I hear you clearly my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Thanks Bill
I'm glad you like this piece. I had fun writing it
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment
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Ohhh. YAY!! Brilliantly done... didnt you enter it into a contest? But it's very good... remind me to sing it to Mother and Grandmother when i see them next... *giggles* Might just get me disowned from my mother and i'd just be worth it to sing to Grandmother, she cant disown me again. WHOOP WHOOP.
Very poetically written with a good flow and Blah blah blah.
Claire-Anne
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Thanks Claire-Anne
Sing it...hell..get a chior to sing it with you! lmao
I didn't enter it into a contest, I'm holding a contest where I want poets to do this exact thing, lol. I can't enter my own contest...I aint that egocentric, lmao.
Glad you like it
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Awesome!
Hahaha, had me howling, very well penned hunni, got a hell of an imagination there, my lad also thinks its cool he wants to copy it to the PC!!
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It was fun writing this :ady
Your Son is more than welcome to copy it, bet remember...I hold the copyright, lol.
I do have a hell of an imagination,is it any surprise I was named Lord Of Darkness, Master of Mayhem, Deity Of Destruction and Domination...and sod knows how many other titles that have been bequeathed to me, lol.
I'm glad you like this piece
Tis such fine twisting the innocent to the macabre
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ahh twisted carols, arn't they the best LMAO.
Has a good flow, love the twist of words. nicely done.
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They are the best, lol. And they are so much more imaginative then the originals, lol
Glad you like this Hon
Now it's your turn, lol.
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awesome !!!
funny as hell ,
creepy , twisted ,and very clever
it was fun to read ,
couldnt help but sing the tune ,
great job with this one !!
~ ♥ Rena ♥ ~
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Thanks Rena
It was fun to write, lol. Just had to try and keep the flow of the original piece.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It must be somewhat close to the correct flow if you managed to sing it in time, lol.
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hey! You stole my song!!! Grrrr *snarls Cujo style* Yeah it's very good though but still *stalks off*
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Down Cujo!
I didn't know it was your song, besides...I also done Away In A Manger and Silent Night, lol.
Glad you like this Nicola
And thanks for reading and commenting
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Lol yeah I wrote Walking In a sLAYER'S wONDERLAND for your contest lol
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You weren't supposed to tell me. It's an anonymous contest, lol.
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Excellent, very chilling...Well done! Every stanza was spooky and enchanting...in a sick twisted way lmao
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Thanks sarah Glad you enjoyed this write. I'm holding a contest where people have to twist songs...so why not show them how it's done, lol.
It was hard, but fun
Glad you enjoyed it.
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