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Hard Reality




living in hard reality,
couple of poets dissembled
poured own imaginations
live in street of bitterness.

unreconciled  
takes a decision
torture puts end.
invite other poets,
in country of imagination.

hardly begin travel,
so many lovely sceneries,
catch sight castles on air...
resolve to choose one between so many
start to occupy it...

later full of joy,
prepare table of the fraternity

supply love,
bread of life
drink wine of friendship
exhausted happiness,
fall asleep in lap of night.

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: What is the reality?

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  • Tangled Angle
    December 22, 2007

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    not sure if i am seeing the purpose of having an exclamation point at the end. i think we could do without it.
    besides that, this was well done.


  • VanitaVarsha
    December 14, 2007
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    pretty

    i like the imagery and great word choice.