Soaring elevated, beauty unleashed,
in a midst of a stunning,vibrant vivacious angel.
Her splendour is visible to all who see her.
Her beauty is unleashed upon the world
She is gone.
Rapidly, respectfully
I miss this angel
The brightness of her light has gone
Once more extinguished in the light of this harsh world
I wish,
I could seek out this angel once again glimpse,
her beauty- her love, there for all to see.
Author notes
about baby sis who passed away
Option 3
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- 6 Lines Of Brilliance by Harrisham Minhas.
300 points, ended December 14, 2007, 10 entries
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this is very well done, sad in a beautiful way, great job! =]
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This is a beautiful poem you did a really nice job I enjoyed reading it!
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I am so sorry to hear about your baby sister. You did an excellent job with this poem. God bless you always and congratulations on winning the bronze. It truly deserved to win the gold.
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What a wonderful poem in dedication to your baby sister!
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Very lovely and sweet, which I am sure you get a lot for this kind of poem. Excellent short poem!
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This is written so beautifully and it yet so sad, a wonderful choice of words.
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So sweet
Hey,
This is very touching, sad, yet sweet. I am so sorry for your loss, really. Yor choice for words were very good, and I for sure felt the emotion in this piece.
Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck!
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Short but beautiful. You wrote it very well ^^
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this is very sweet
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Wonderful piece. well done, strong, powerful!
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stunning piece u have shown thanx 4 your entry and good luck
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Very strong. powerful. Good lcuk in the contest!
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Wonderfully expressed.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas
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Wow very beautifully written poem good luck in the contest
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