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Childhood Friends turn into Something so Much More...

You just show up here
What do you want me to say to you
after all this time?

Once upon a time your face flooded my mind
your eyes woke me up inside
brought me into the light of your smile

Niagara  falls of tears when you left
accumulated resentment
such a cruel oblivion Was forced upon me

My common sence is screaming to leave you here
take my heart and bury it deep inside
my heart is crying out for yours
the softness of your voice soothes my soul

I can't seem to pull my hand away from yours
though your only resting your warmth on my palm
slightly carressing the center, sending chills
like lightning though my veins...

Tears filled my eyes as our past came rushing back
I dont want this to be just a beautiful illusion
If I didnt know any better, I'd still be in love with you

Your arms embrace me within the strenth of your chest
as my heart pounds with uncertainty
moist lips pressed against mine with soft pressure

I feel as if I'm falling deeper and deeper
as minutes upon minutes pass by quickly
I didnt want to look into the eyes of the one I'm drawn to

How easily I'm here, right now, with you
doing things we wouldnt dream of
when we were childhood friends

I was addicted to you when we played
so young, so nieve,so full of curiosity
Maturity comes so quickly,years pass
How can I turn down such an opportunity

I don't want to be a fool
yet I dont want to let go of you
as we lay together
for the first time in 15 years
Our friendship turned into something so much more
that night..

As I enjoy your scent of your body
            in the morning light...




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  • Ephiphany
    December 20, 2007
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  • Great Cthulhu
    December 15, 2007

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    Awwww!

    "I can't seem to pull my hand away from yours
    though your only resting your warmth on my palm
    slightly carressing the center, sending chills
    like lightning though my veins..."

    This is definitely my favorite stanza, very powerful, indeed! This is a wonderful write, illustrating the reservations of feelings thought gone, but just buried underneath the jumbled memories of life. I have been in this moment, thanks for bringing up some wonderful memories of my own! I love how the last lines mirror a new beginning!


    • xxlisajazminexx
      December 15, 2007
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      Thank you so much for your kind words !

      I love to have some of my more personal poems read and enjoyed as you have...
      its truly a wonderful feeling...
      You have captured exactly what I was trying to convey when I penned this piece...
      Your comments were most definately appreciated and valued my friend

  • Ephiphany
    December 14, 2007

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    Very enchanting....

    Memories my Talented friend.

    Everlasting memories stem from this piece

    captivating and so much more

    I loved the imager in this

    very alluring and reaps of astounding love.

     

    All my best,

    EphiphanyKiss


    • xxlisajazminexx
      December 15, 2007
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      AWW Piff

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment
      your comments are always appreciated and valued


  • Expression
    December 14, 2007

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    aww i kno this kinda story lol...its always one that leaves you confused in the end..good or bad.
    but yea i loved this ..great imagery and very descriptive keep it up gurl
    Much Luv
    ♥kaila♥

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    Awwww I have a friend like this and it is a friendship and a love that I treasure thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love


    • xxlisajazminexx
      December 14, 2007
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      Thank you

      Thank you Starz for your kind words and comments as always
      Your comments are always valued

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