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A Blue Moon

Moonbeams flow pink horizons glow
meditative doused in petals
a blue moon mesmerizes, tantalizes,
as her heart questions loves puzzles
drenched in white roses her heart aglow
quenched desires; blanket heart’s fires
a maiden’s quest within a blue moon


Lee Taylor
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12/14/2007

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Thank you for providing such an inspiring picture as a prompt!

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  • Tender Expressions
    March 4, 2008

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    Such a sweet beauty to behold. Your words choice and flow are wondrous and very pleasing to the eye as well. Well Done! Keep up the great work!

    ♥
    ~TE~


  • Desire gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: A Blue Moon
    Oh My
    Love how You did the internal rhyme and
    also brought forth images to take the reader on a Journey
    Powerful piece penned
    Love the words:
    meditative doused in petals
    and
    drenched in white roses


    Beautifully versed
    also love the border using the picture~~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also
    Your Talent!
    **Judging will be done shortly
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Mystical-Gardenia
      December 18, 2007
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      Hello Desire

      I'm delighted you enjoyed Blue Moon and my efforts to use the beautiful, inspring picture you provided. Thank you for being such an amazing contest Host My congratulations to the gold, bronze and HM winners


  • MargaretG
    December 15, 2007

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    My first son was born on a blue moon, so I know it is the second full moon in a calendar month.
    I like the internal rhymes and the second last line in particular - the contrast emphasises the turmoil of her thoughts. I agree with your interpretation of the picture. Good luck!

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      December 15, 2007
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      Hi Margaret

      Thank you so much for your ever helpful comments they are so appreciated Awesome, you saw the same thing I did in the painting amazing... unique minds think so alike

      Wishing you and yours a glorious weekend

  • Virginia Logsdon
    December 14, 2007
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    Fragile and a little sensual.

    What a play on words.You wrote a specially nice romance poem.

    • Mystical-Gardenia
      December 14, 2007
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      Hello Virginia...

      Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and share your warm, insightful, encouraging comments I'm delighted you took the time and enjoyed your visit Please stop by any time your insightful, helpful, commentaries are always welcomed

      Wishing you and yours a joyous Holiday Season and a Fantastic New Year!!

      ~Myst~

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