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Even Angels Cry

BlueAngel.jpg Crying Angel image by boylover2211

 

 


Even angels cry when things go wrong,
they breakdown and their tears rain upon us.
Their pain is much worse than what we feel,
they weep uncontrollably with all of their hearts and souls.
You can hear them as they sigh from up above.
You can even feel their agony as their sadness lands upon you.
Heaven's angels also have emotions, remember to honor and respect them.

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Prompt: Tears In Heaven
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  • Desire gold member
    December 24, 2007
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Even Angels Cry
    Aaaaaaaaaaw I remember this gem penned and how it tugged at Spirit, Angels are near and dear

    Magnificent!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Spirit!


    ****Wish I could give more clappies but
    the system won't let me because I had
    earlier...sorry

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    **Judging will be done shortly~~
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    This one touches me in more ways than you could imagine; someone very special wrote a poem for me with the same title and basically, the same content
    (except his, of course, was more personalized)
    A very fine sharing into this contest; I wish you the best!


  • daffodilblossom
    December 20, 2007

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    i luv this

    this made me a touch sad but also it is beautiful was the picture part of the prompt or your choice either way wonderful picture great poem


  • Desire gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Even Angels Cry
    Oh My
    Powerful piece with emotions that pull hard
    Love the message also the words:
    remember to honor and respect them

    Angels are Gifts that hopefully people
    don't take for granted...
    but sadly some do

    Beautifully versed

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also
    Your Talent!
    **Judging will be done shortly
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    December 14, 2007

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    Haunting, beautiful!

    You have wonderfully orchestrated a bit of heaven and what some wonder about and given life to thoughts I'm sure many of us have questioned!! Maybe when it rains that is the time the angels cry in unison Well done!!

    Thank you for sharing such wonderful thoughts

    Wishing you and yours a joyous Holiday Season


  • delightfulmess silver member
    December 14, 2007

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    Lovely.. It must be very hard to always do what is right... So I can see this perspective clearly..
    What a great depiction sweetie and best of luck in the contest


    love,
    Delila


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 14, 2007

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    angels cry...tears do fall...feeling their agony...why is your voice soooooooooooooooo sad excellent take on the prompt! best to you in the contest ~

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