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Playing fair

life's a game
of give and take
one never knows
who wants to play

all take a chance
each time they move
could be the last
they ever make

so be careful
look both ways
for each choice
a reaction ensues

sometimes best
to fold in hand
just let life take you
where it may

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  • sheltered
    December 14, 2007
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    This game we call life.
    Definitly a muti-faceted game of skill and luck.
    Congrats.


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 14, 2007

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    excellent poem! love the entire meaning of this and it speaks volumes to the reader...one really should try to play fair, and watch each move they make...best to you in the contest ~Trisha~