You look up and wonder what's it like when angels cry?
The skies turn many shades of gray, while drops of water fall from
heaven above. They leave stains of recollections upon your face.
They feel your pain and heart-wrenching despair
of a love so pure and true. Lost so suddenly and so young.
That is why the angels cry, so you will remember. So you
will go on. Never forgetting the greatest gift you ever possessed.
Author notes
Needs much work but here ya go! I used Tears in Heaven.
A contest entry
- ~* In What Voice Can You Speak *~ by Desire.
525 points, ended December 17, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Angels Cry
Oh My Word
Wonderful piece with emotions that drip from Your quill and this is a unique presentation
I learn something new everyday~~
Love the words:
They leave stains of recollections
This tugs at the heartstrings
Beautifully versed
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also
Your Talent!
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Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I hope you are not hurt or no one has broken your heart. The river of life runs in our eyes, for within it, our souls cleanse. Sometimes, crying is better than laughing.
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