I remember the day you looked at my sister with lust in your eyes, before I would let you touch her,I'd rather die.I protected her from you night after night trying to hide the abuse from her sight.That wasn't easy when you abused me in our bed,Oh how I wished you were dead. She says i am her angel because I saved her from you. She seen the things you us to do. she watched the tears roll down my face,so silent I'd be while you were hurting me.praying my sister was sound asleep, so some innocence she could keep.
My childhood was filled with pain and shame, you nearly caused me to become insane. Hiding a secret that was so hard to keep, caused pain that went way beyond deep. I kept you from hurting my little sister by not letting you do it again. So in the end it was me that wins
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You just made me cry. this is so far the most personal write i have ever read on allpoetry. i loved your last line the most it made me cry alittle more though. this is a realy great write. you so consider entering it into a contest. i am sure it would win. i am really speechless by this poem even though i just wrote you seven lines.
keep on writing
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you were your sisters angel and I'm sure she'll be eternally greatful for what you done for her. I'm sure she loves you lots and lots... you done well to stay sane throughout what you went through, it sure as hell isn't easy to... but you have won and you are the better person, glad you can see that.
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Truely sad and powerful write my friend. You have penned many tearfilled emotions and I pour my heart out to you. I know many of these same feelings.
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So sad
You speak of a thing that just boils my blood. As a father of 3 daughters I cannot understand why any man would do such a thing. You have great courage
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Welcome to All Poetry !
Yes this is the wonderful thing about poetry I feel. You can express your innermost feelings which can often be a watershed for pent up emotions.
This is a tragic , raw and heartfelt write. I hope your sister is okay and that in some way you will find some peace one day.
Thank you so much for sharing.
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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Wow that was really personal and wonderfully writte. Maybe put it into poem form with more line breaks jsut for easier reading, but overall I loved it!
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