Is
Walking through a empty space,
Different than falling down a hole.
Is
Dying to be with the one you love
The same as whoring death?
Is
Living in the dark, simply to hide from the truth
Such a horrible thing??
What is the difference in consequence?
What is the point of condemnation?
So many fucking questions.
Too many answers to find.
What are the fruits of falling in love?
Is it worth them turning rancid?
Is life really all it seems?
Or a fucking glass box,
Engineered by those with power.
A sadistic toy with deadly results.
Why do we always end it all,
With war and fucked aggravation?
Is
“Fuck it all”
All I have to say??
Lets hope not……
Author notes
so, this really isn't a poem at all.
simply me writing my thoughts out.
i find myself simply using "fuck it all" for everything now, instead of trying to fix anything.
Stop Me. please.
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i really really like this. i love how you've ended it off, its really powerful.
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ummm well dont get me wrong but i don't really like this poem like i said nothing to you it is the writing i like a lot of poems but this one doesn't really intrest me please don't get mad thats just how i feel sorry but keep writing
tori
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Neither do i.
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hope you know i didn't mean what i wrote in my bash poem for your contest. it was pretty challenging and fun tho. nothing against you or anything you've written for reals tho.
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I'd say lets hope not! Very well done! I think you have alot to say even if it all boils down to "Fuck it all" Keep writing I really enjoyed this!
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Ah!
I see you're living into your username. The 'f' word is becoming such a cliched expression of angst... I think it's time we moved on. -
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thats the whole (haha) fucking point of this poem. because i DO just say "fuck it" instead of changing anything.
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"fuck it all" sometimes works though. trust me. im there too... but i still thought it was good... lol your pretty good at writing. even thoughts. lol... smart im guessing.. lol well nice job.
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