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My Favorite Girl

When she's around,
I can't help never being down.
She lifts me when my spirit is low,
and puts me in a mellow state, ya know.

She is always there when I need to vent,
and calms me with her sweetest scent.
A shoulder to cry on when I am sad,
and one of the closest friends I've ever had.

Can't help but laugh when she is near,
always brings good times and cheer.
She never brings drama or all that bullshit,
and she stays true like the rhymes I spit.

Always there when guys act like guys,
and get this, she aint never shy.
She'll let you hold her until u can feel,
her certain satisfaction and sex appeal.

She is never the same when we hang out,
but always different in a good way, no doubt.
She's never boring and never plain,
Man don't you know her, she's Mary Jane.



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  • WuzGood
    August 1
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    wow, nice write, I really liked this, great job! thanks and good luck!

  • I remember when your girl used to be my girl Girl, if I keep reading your stuff you gon make me wanna do something I'm too old to be doing. I smoke too many Kools to be trying to smoke anything else.

  • jopo
    March 30
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    good as shit

  • leperconslayer
    May 25, 2008
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    thats a hella sweet poem and you said it perfectly mary jane is the best in every way. nice work.