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i hate you

i hate the way you make me feel inside
i hate the way you make me cry.
i hate how you scream and yell
i hate how you are going to jail
i hate that your an asshole
i hate that you made me feel
i hate it when you tell me things that i want to hear
i hate it when you whisper sweet nothings into my ear
i hate the fact that you are with her
i hate the fact that i cant be with you
i hate not being able to see you
i hate not being able to get you out of my mind
i hate that i feel this way
i hate, most of all, the sad fact,
        that after all of this shit
                i really dont hate you at all

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kinda 10 things i hate about you-ish... but i dont give a shit

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  • Anti-Saint
    March 2, 2008
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    i know exactly how this feels.


  • z etoile
    February 19, 2008
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    Cool this is awesome and you let your feelings out very well great job!


    • Sunless
      February 19, 2008
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      thankyou. most of my poetry is like that, my emotions in words