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i'd like to be under the sea

to sparkle like a mermaid
to ride rusty anchors beneath your bows
gaze at my refection in their silver
surf the twisting currents
i breathe quenching waves
i wish on starfish
save up my sand dollars
wear pearl earrings
i'm electrifying
best friends with all the eels
blowing bubbles you can't burst
living right below your chaos
and when you rock my waves
i roll with the tune
take my seahorse for a ride
glide past schools of rainbow fish
dodge the coral reefs
to where i make sand angels
and all the maids and mermen
laugh about your land
here, the sunfish are bright
like our jellyfish discos
we're glowing and psychedelic
once i came up, surfaced
caught a glimpse of you
forbidden, i will not forget
with a flip of turquoise in my tail
i was gone
riding dolphin's fins
back to where i'd like to be
under the sea
in an octopus's garden
in the shade

notice a little beatle's action? ;)

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 2
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    I enjoyed this write

    What vision you show within this piece and such life indeed


  • a dozenglassroses
    February 20
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    Oh this is so beautiful. I loved the piece the background I loved it all! Keep writing!

  • savestheday
    February 20
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    very cool
  • Aliuar
    January 19

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    Enchanting

    Okay tihs poem was very enchanting I enjoyed the words you picked. I like the Sand Angels, that sounds very magical.


  • charcoal skies
    January 5

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    amazingly beautiful.

    this poem screams everything in you. i mean it, i can see your uniqueness with in it. i'm feeling that you love sea/marine life. i love that, amazing. and you look like a real life mermaid.

    i loved these lines

    i breathe quenching waves
    i wish on starfish
    save up my sand dollars
    wear pearl earrings
    i'm electrifying


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    it screamed out your name.
    ♥
    i love it.


  • CCSUNSHINE x
    December 14, 2007
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    forgot these<3


  • CCSUNSHINE x
    December 14, 2007

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    living right below your chaos
    and when you rock my waves
    i roll with the tune

    i love this. it's so innocent and upbeat.

  • WTF-Hatchwork silver member
    December 14, 2007
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    pretty cool


  • girl shaman
    December 13, 2007

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    i loved the jellyfish disco.. that was cute. well this whole poem was really cute its adorable for you

  • starbomb - x
    December 13, 2007
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    woah

    this reminds me of one of those spongebob episodes and the little mermaid. ♥

    i loved this part best;

    i'm electrifying
    best friends with all the eels
    blowing bubbles you don't burst
    living right below your chaos
    and when you rock my waves
    i roll with the tune
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