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My Director

Magnetic piece,
in peaceful spirits
Gravity defying,
keeps us aspiring

14-12-07

A contest entry

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  • Kram
    January 1, 2008
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    Gravity

    there is gravity in words


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 14, 2007

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    Wonderful

    I love all of your words that you have used in this write.
    Its simply leaps out from the page, and within the lines you can feel so much.
    Well done sis
    Hugs
    Your Big Sister xxx


  • intanglio2ring
    December 13, 2007

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    Wonderfully aspiring!

    Great take on the prompt using your 10 words.
    Thanks
    Tang

  • tara wilson gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    very good metaphor here, wonderful, succinct poem, very creative with the prompt!