Fear pierces the plains,
As the angels tremble in pain,
Watching the sky engulfed in flames, Armageddon.
A contest entry
- Your Dark Materials - What will you share??? by intanglio2ring.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very straight forward, nothing sugar coated about this one
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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I think this is the best poem of this length. I like the way it is quick and to the point and not about trees!
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And you brought up the end!
Whew! This one almost hurts to read - great 3 liner!
Thanks
Tang
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