They say I am insane,
that my mind flickers like a candle flame.
but I am just toying with thier heads,
dreaming of the day they will end up dead.
They mock me they wanne see me cry,
but i just keep planning the day that they will die.
They say I am insane,
that my mind flickers like a candle flame.
I have found a way to make them all pay Blades,Knives,Guns and saws,
here I come to justify my cause.
They will all feel my wrath,
I will cut thier throats with my heart of glass.
They say I am insane,
that my mind flickers like a candle flame.
A contest entry
- 14 to 18 ages enter your best prewrite Judged by RedwingSpirit.
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How do you like it? Its my first to publish here.
Comments
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This is insanely chilling! i love how it's written and that it portrays a mentally unfit character who is clearly trying to avenge something that happened in his past. This is the reason I put this contest out.
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Wow!
This is good.
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This poem is great
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Excellent Poem Dear Thank you for entering into my contest I wish you the best of luck
RedwingSpirit
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sweet poem!!! way good litte insane and alot of emo sweet job littlw sis
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