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m.o.r.e.

from the too-straight red line on my wrist,
[perfect ]crimson liquid bubbles forth,
  coming like an impatient lover.
.......more.....
i ...need...more.
Its not enough!
  Harder!
    Deeper!
      More!
make it count, you stupid girl!
DEEPER, GODDAMNIT!
I'm not numb yet!
...
I..
I don't want to feel anymore....

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Mmhm.

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