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I Fell For You

Far beyond my imaginations
Completely different from my dreams
Not even close to my ideas of love
The way we met had to be fate
What resulted from it wasn't coincidence

The bond we formed was too strong
For it to be anything other than love
Like the true everlasting kind
We'll have the life long relationship
And be happy til the end of time

You stole my heart with those simple words
You filled my soul with the essence of you
You loved my entire being with yours
There was no way for me to resist the pull
I just can't explain what you've done to me

Except that I completely fell for you

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Quote Inspired by:
“For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.”
Judy Garland


I love you darling

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  • Desire gold member
    December 20, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: I Fell For You

    Beautiful piece penned which pulled the heartstrings especially the ending
    The message within swells the eyes so filled with emotions


    Love these lines:
    The way we met had to be fate
    What resulted from it wasn't coincidence

    The bond we formed was too strong
    For it to be anything other than love


    Magnificent take on the quote prompt~~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also voice!
    **Judging will be done shortly
    Best wishes to You in this contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • LoveToLaugh07
    December 15, 2007

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    This is abosolutely amazing. I love it. It captures emotion, joy, and love. Wonderful! Love ya girl!