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and I 'll Wait for You

A person prepares

  For a life's journey.

One that will take them,

  Far, far away.

 

They travle not alone,

  With someone who has died for them.

Over the mountains and hills,

  To a place called "Heaven Above".

 

The sparkle and glow leaves their eyes.

  The end of pain from the old life is shed.

Don't look so sad with all those tears.

  It was the earthly body that died.

 

In Heaven there is a pleanty to do.

  The Angels will welcome me.

I asked to prepare for ye.

  And in my spare time,

 

And I'll wait for you. 

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  • Christina-is-crazy
    September 22, 2008

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    Hey
    First id like to say
    this is a beautiful poem.
    I really liked it.
    I held this contest becasue my aunt just died not that long ago.
    and i wanted to see what other people
    thought and felt about ther loved ones who passed
    and there love ones who are dying.
    Such an amazing poem.
    i really like your writing
    Thanks so much for entering my contest
    i hope to see some of your other poems in my upcoming contest~



    ~~~christina


  • Katie Lazette
    December 13, 2007
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    Lovely write

    Your poem is filled with so much beauty, heartfelt words. Great imagery.