behind those beautiful emeralds
enhanced by maybelline
transition's taking place
child to woman, serene
gazing into the future
while standing in the past
the present's much to confusing
the changes...much too fast
child to woman, serene
holding tightly
to childhood dreams...
somewhere in between
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very Good
This is very good with superb imagery. This poem speaks of an awakening of one's self esteem and sexual awareness. Very good job of creating a powerful emotional statement. The message is clear and truly poetically expressed. This is sensuous, imaginative, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem.
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thank you for entering this most beautiful poetic piece. this so expresses what she is going through right now, the transition between young woman and child. these kids are going through so many changes at this age and the times are tough to change in
i wish i could find the words that express how this makes me feel. let's just say BRAVO 
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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awe... What a piece... for this great young lady...
Wonderfully done I am sure her mother shall love this...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Delila
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