I want to forget,
To forget what has happened.
It causes me trouble and grief,
unnecessary stress and fear.
But if I forget,
Will I change?
How does the past
Affect who people are?
Why is it
That some forget
While others are forever burdened?
My Past is suffocating me,
Choking me,
Someone help.
I can't breathe...
A contest entry
- True colours. by Delicate Fire Water.
450 points, ended December 27, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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*Great!*
I can so feel what you are saying her in this poem, and this kinda thing is what I was looking for =) Thank you so much for your entry, and good luck in the contest,
All the best,
*Stephi*
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"My Past is suffocating me,
Choking me,
Someone help.
I can't breathe... "
If we can only leave it all behind.
But alas,it is always there, the dreaded
"PAST"
We have to learn to live with it.
This is a beautiful write.
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