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lucky number 07

ive been broken
so many times.
what have i learned?
i cant live
like this.
i cant stand
without a crutch.

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  • Metaphorist
    December 13, 2007

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    Ambiguous- always a good quality in a poem. I really liked that last line. I've been there too.

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