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I Am The Girl(woman)

I am the woman you adore
I am the girl who used to live next door
I am the one you need
I am the one from who you feed

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  • pozo
    December 14, 2007
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    Good write with good use of rhyme here Thanks for entering
    All the best
    Pozo