The feeling I have for you helps me soar above the clouds
Completely leaving this earth, the commotion and crowds
With this feeling I can give you my most precious possession
My heart, a one of a kind piece of the world's collection
I can only give you this possession of mine
If you promise your love will last the test of time
Promise me you will not break my very fragile heart
Don't make me go back on the doubts I had at the start
Please tell me you won't, please tell me you'll try
For if you break my fragile heart I will surely die
I'll only give this gift to you if you swear you never will
So please I hand this to you and with your love I hope if will fill
Author notes
picture number 9
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - Pick a number by Naridill.
600 points, ended December 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very descripting and intriguing.
I like the personal touches added.
Creates a beautiful feel to it.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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this poem is soooo good!
I love the images and ooooh its just really good! -
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haha thanks buddy!
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