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Rainy Day Fire

I suppose
you think me cruel
for forcing you
to burn brighter
and suck down all the air
but someone
has to feed the fire
and protect you
from the rainy days.

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A love poem or a hate poem?

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 19, 2007
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    A love poem filled with protection and care. I liked this very much. ~Pamela


  • Swan song gold member
    December 13, 2007
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    I like it I don't know why but this poem has a really cool ring to it. Well done!


  • CherryOnTop
    December 13, 2007
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    I love the intrigue of this. A love poem or a hate poem. Very clever!!!

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