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I'm Stuck.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.
Thoughts about who I love.

My feelings are jumbled,
I'm fading away.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

Am I really in love?
Is it all just a hoax?

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

Do I love him?
Does he love me?

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

He's all I think about.
He's all I want.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

How long have I been stuck?
Weeks on end.
Someone get me out.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

The one that can get me out,
Is nowhere to be found.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

The one to get me out...
He will not help.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

Nobody else but himself can get me out.
I'll be here the rest of my life.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought.

Maybe one day he'll come through.
Maybe one day he'll get me out.

I'm stuck in a tunnel,
This tunnel of thought.

Maybe one day he'll get me out.
Maybe one day I'll be free with him.

I'm stuck in a tunnel of thought I created by my feelings for him.

SET ME FREE!
_____ SET ME FREE!

Author notes

Ok... This is about the same guy as before.  He should know who he is. I underscored where his name would be so I would save him from embarresment. You can try to guess who it is but I won't tell you who.

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  • TacoSexyFail
    January 11, 2008
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    wow I loved the *Im stuck in a tunnel of thought I created by my feelings for him* its like its his fault your like this but hes the only one who can help. Ive been there...though for me it was the person who was keeping me alive made me want to die the most...anyway I totally uderstood


  • Natelystious
    December 13, 2007

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    I loved your choice of metaphors in using a tunnel to describe your feelings of love. Out of all the objects you could have chosen, you stuck with this which speaks a lot about how you experienced it.